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Pre-Writing Ideas
6/28/2013
Pre-Writing for what would be a managa if I had art skills. This will probably turn out to be a novella or a short story, depending on if I can get more ideas for a background and more characters. I am hoping for an Adventure, Mystery, Romance, and Action themed story.
 
Wisdom of the Butterfly
Title is not finalized
 
Main Characters:
Akahana Chie, Girl 15
Daichi Etsuo, Boy 16
Chou Etsuo, Girl 20
Eri Choukichi, Boy 17
 
Place:
Yamagata Prefecture
Nagai
Ōsakagakugei High School
 
Time:
Start, Winter 2010
Middle, Spring 2012
End, Fall 2014
 
Story:
Without a mother or father, Daichi is forced to live with his older sister, Chou. This morning, Daichi has found a letter explaining the disappearance of Chou. One year later, a girl named Akahana was just saved from a group of hoodlums by Eri, Daichi's childhood friend. While investigating the gang's hideout, police have found important clues as to the mystery behind Chou's disappearance and even a possibility that she may even be dead. Determined to not give up on looking for his sister, Daichi decides to take matters into his own hands. No matter what the cost is.
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    NeNe
    Oooo I'm excited to read what you come up with! Good luck! May the muses be kind to you ^^
    7/01/2013
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    FunnyCop
    Of course I will post it when I'm done. The final plans will be on my blog when they are finished and the first few chapters as well. The whole book will be posted on the forums. I will try to add some new ideas to keep it original and a lot of events to keep downtime to a minimum.
    6/29/2013
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    Nyome
    It's not a bad story so far as it does leave a lot of room for originality. Only concern would it being too slow of a story. I'll give it a look if you decide to post some later.
    6/29/2013
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    complex
    mhm. Will you post it when you're done? =D
    6/28/2013
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    FunnyCop
    I was thinking about keeping it realistic but with elements that are not what someone would expect. So some scenes would have a little more drama than normal and some things just seem impossible when they truly are. The base story is still under construction and I'm ironing out the small details, but this is what I'm growing the final plans from.
    6/28/2013
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    complex
    Plot could use a bit more spice: you might be missing the 'how?', which would be answered through your last sentence. Think also about these things: is it in the present, past, future? An alternate world? Unless you want to keep your story realistic.
    6/28/2013
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